WALT: combine all of the features of narrative to create your own story.
hey bloggers,
2 weeks have gone past and i have now finished my own narrative story and it is about a dog called zach that won’t stop growing and so his owner charlie Anderson decides to take him out for a walk. but that went all wrong…
read on to find out more
This is the story of a big brown dog with his owner Charlie Anderson…
One gloomy Friday night Charlie was getting ready for bed until … ding dong ding dong Charlie opened the door
“What’s that?” he called out. It was a parcel addressed to charlie anderson 37 alldens lane.
“We will open it in the morning, Charlie,” said his mother izzy…
“MORNING!!!” sang Charlie excitedly the next morning. “Time to open my parcel” he ran downstairs and ate breakfast like a pig. When it was time Charlie ripped off the cardboard and… WoW! “It’s a toy,” Charlie exclaimed excitedly.
“I think it is one of those toys that evaporates water to make it grow.” Charlie put it in a glass jar, and right away it started growing. He couldn’t stop it but he said “abracadabra and alakazam” but it didn’t stop until he said “presticaro” and it stopped with a sudden shake then woof woof…
The next day he woke up and the dog was licking his ears so Charlie named the dog Zach “zach is a good name for you” he said. So once he fed zach food he took him out for a walk but forgot he wasn’t toilet trained so he flooded 37 alldens lane with dog pee. And Zach also made an earthquake because he was jumping up and down on his 4 ginormous paws. Charlie said “Zach why why why now i will have to clean and fix all of the garbage cans you knocked over, and scraped all of the cars.
“Oh dear” said mum
“Yeah” I said.
“What should we do” said mum and dad
“Clean up I guess” I said. Zach was saying “woof woof.” After Charlie had cleaned up for 2 hours. He explained to the dog how to be toilet trained and Zach listened. Next day Charlie took Zach out for a walk to the vet and the vet said… “holy cow an enormous dog”
“I know” i said
“Where did you get him” said the vet
“Came in a parcel addressed to me but i didn’t order it it just came”
The vet checked zach and said…
“The dog’s fine just put him in this once a day for 1 minute and he will shrink back to normal size in 8-10 weeks, don’t forget to take him for a walk every day.
“Ok thanks” i said
The end!❣
by dani k